Deep Slumber


Breaking past vows
And darkening the soul
Negative
energy spurs within me
Reaching the brink of madness,
I surface towards mildness
Embracing for a deep slumber.

This post is a response to a prompt at 3WW. The words are: Break, Negative, Surface. And I'm so sorry if this is very small again! I wrote this in a hurry!

Posted by Tharangni

10 comments :

  1. I think it's just fine. Thanks for the contribution.

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  2. I like the picture. It goes well with your poem. They both give the feeling of a dream. I mean a real dream and not just what people mean when they say, "It's a dream."

    wisewit

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  3. Well done... the picture works well too.

    I like your site too... nice setup.

    Jim

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  4. @Wisewit ~ Thank you! ^_^ and yes, you are right! :)

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  5. I think short is cool in this three word process. Your picture is the best thing about this post. :D

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  6. Kinda describes the way I have dreams... :)

    Yes, it's short and effective. Like someone said - "No words Wasted."

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  7. Loved this creative little piece! Nice layout, font, picture ... all added to the poem to create a pleasing experience.

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  8. I liked both.the picture and the poem. :)

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