Struggle


Struggle for my love
My heart aches for your closeness
I dream of that day


This is a reply to a prompt at Haiku Heights for the day August 15 2010. Prompt #4: Struggle.
Photo from here.
Posted by Tharangni

9 comments :

  1. hi Tharangni, this was a nice haiku :) romantic of sorts..

    just a small suggestion.. try not to use images which have similar words already in them.. it diverts attention from ur words then.. :)

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  2. Nice imagination .. describing a lots of emotions

    Nice work ..Keep it up :)


    take care
    KS :)

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  3. @Leo~ Thank you! :) ok i will! ^_^

    @Vivek~ Thanks! :)

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  4. Hi Tharangni,

    beautiful penned words...

    yes, we always struggle and wait for that love, right!

    nice, nice one! see my own struggle too!

    have a nice day! :)

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  5. Good :)
    But I guess Haiku is not an easy form of art... -___-

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  6. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/haiku-struggle-plus-belated-birthdays-awards/

    three awards for you.
    help us visit 4 friends who have been celebrating birthdays ..

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