Last Chance


Anna tried pushing that door.
The door, which people said, was the gateway to see her mother back again.
But sadly it didn’t even budge.
And time was running out.
She had to get that door open before the sunset.
Or else its magic would disappear forever.
And today was the last chance.
However Anna was a gullible and she believed whatever the people had told her.
If she had put in some thoughts before going ahead, she’d have realized that such a theory never existed!
But sadly she hadn’t. And time is nimble. It goes fast. And you can’t get it back again.
Anna let out a loud cry as the sunset. She believed that her one last chance was gone.
This post has been posted by me for 3WW for the date June/2/2010 and the words are : Budge, Nimble, Theory
Posted by Tharangni

14 comments :

  1. Somewhat sad, but the feeling is there.

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  2. Nice writing ♥ Anyway thanks for the comment! Ah, I heart black currant cake as well! =3



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  3. Very well expressed in just a simple and short words... you raised the emotions fairly enough... well done!!!:)

    Take care!:D

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  4. Sometimes were just not able to take the chance.

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  5. A magic door when opportunity knocks just for a little while! Interesting piece of writing!

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  6. aw..nice and creative story..and sad as well..because she didn't see her mom again :/

    btw..i soooo looovvveee your new blog lay out!!!!:D :D!!

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    Gracias por visitar mi Blog ;)
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