A Battle in the Skies



The sky looked different
It wasn’t united for some reason
Their colors were mixed in coherent
Somehow it reminded me of another season
The wind roared in my ears
The leaves danced in the air
As I found it difficult to walk in there
Scurrying for shelter, I found my roof
And the pelting rain just wasn’t aloof
The smell of purity traveled through the world
As the day darkened in no hurdle
The skies flashed
And rolled in anger
No one knew what happened then
As the sun took over its time and realm

Posted by Tharangni

6 comments :

  1. Nice... You write such nice poems about nature, I really admire you for that - I can only write poems about my own feelings. Looking foward to more of your poems always! ^^

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  2. wow..i really love this..the way you describe the simple rumblings of the skies are really fabulous~! nicely done!! :3

    (P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

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  3. @DD-Chan: Thank you! And hey, even now you wrote a superb poem about the World and I think that is really great! Try writing about nature and you too will get it! I find writing about my feelings hard you know! You're real lucky to find em easy to write! :) I envy you for that!

    @Isha:Thank you!^_^ Glad you liked it! :)

    @Ayu: hehe!^_^ Thanks!^_^ Actually the weather was like that one morning when I was going to school, So that was how I got to write about them! :D

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  4. Wow... something like this actually happened with me yesterday. We were shopping for some computer hardware and then it suddenly became cloudy and rained a bit and then it suddenly became sunny a couple of hours later...

    But to put it in a poetic way... GreaT!!

    And to answer your question in my last post -> Given my current status of Education (Engineering Undergrad) I may not be able to... -___- Though I want to...

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  5. Nice read ..looked quite like a brisk .effervesce of..rain ..a nice feeling ...really , your creativity is @ its best ..keep it up.. gud Luck.

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