55 Word Fiction:: The Valentine ♥


He gazed at the sky as he fiddled with the brown packet.
It rattled under his movements.
Just one thought revolved in his mind,
Will she accept it?
Suddenly-
Cheeerrp”, a parrot flew to his shoulder.
Ready my love?
He asked her as she pecked the sunflower seeds in the packet
And nodded her head.

Posted by Tharangni

14 comments :

  1. aww..advance for valentine post eh..?

    love it..:) so sweet ^_^

    its the first time ive read you made 55 fiction :3

    looking forward for more :)

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  2. @Ayu :: Hehehe Yea! :D But I hadn't written 55 fictions for a long time, so i felt like writing one! :)
    @Choco & Azzy-chan: Thank you guys!^_^
    @Sammy: hehe sure! :)

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  3. nice dear...keep writing and rocking...Thanks for dropping by my side...loved your template :)

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  4. 55 word fiction is difficult to pull off.

    However, seeing it's popularity, I'm thinking of trying it too :)

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  5. awhh..Shoo Shweet! :)
    i liked it =]

    keep up the great work!

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  6. @Chavi Mishra: Thank you!^_^ Glad you'd liked it!^_^
    @Selenium: Yea you should try it, it's so much fun!^_^
    @Moonlight: Thank you!^_^ very happy that you like it!!^_^

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  7. @AYU: simple! just write like how you write a msg(50 words).. but just add +5 words! :D

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  8. thanks..i will..ill study hard..^_^ dont worry x)

    btw..i love your new template and header!!!

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  9. RE: Thank you so much for your comment!! (:
    I really like your blog, you're a great writer. ^__^

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  10. @Candy: Hehe! :D Thank you! :) Glad you like it! :) ♥ ~

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