55 Word Fiction: A Moment's Glory


The sound of the applause appealed
To her as she made her,
Way to the podium.
She adjusted the mike
And began her speech:
Good Morning Ev-…”
When suddenly,
BANG!
A gunshot rang in her ears.
She fell down.
Her heartbeats reduced.
Her vision blurred.
And she breathed her last,
At her last glorious moment.

Posted by Tharangni

19 comments :

  1. the moment i saw the pic of your post makes me shocked and terrified its nyu of elfren lied if im not mistaken..

    the 55 fiction of yours is kinda horrifying and makes me feel sad about the ending..indeed i great one :)

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  2. @Isha: Thank you!^_^ And I really love your short and sweet blog posts!^_^
    @Ayu: Well... I actually don't know which anime it is. But i just searched google for'blood anime' and that pic showed up. So I linked that up! :D
    Thanks!^_^ I like to have some shocking ends! :D
    Okey!^_^ I'll post it there.. and u reply mine back too! :D

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  3. @☆Ths[Schrei]☆ : well..if that's the case im glad ive name it out for you..hmm..its just that there's only a few bloody animes..keiichi told me higurashi no naku koro ni is better than elfren lied so im currently watching it..*sigh* speaking of keiichi (of AF)i missed him now..im no longer active at AF because every time I go there all the persons OL at the chatbox were strangers idk them >_<

    anyway i also like shocking ends..but i delve in sadder and tragic stories..

    hmm..how do you find my latest post..? I guess the msg. of my poem doesn't clearly conveyed.., does it..?
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  4. @Ayu: Well sorry i didnt read the poem b4! :D
    but i read now:
    it's really nice!^_^
    i like the line:
    Unbeholden mist of dusk and leaves
    Wrinkling eye suddenly weeps
    it's so... sad... like... some one protected cries?
    so keichii ur bad dad at AF?

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  5. wow, i love it so much!!! try to visit my blog about photography...

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  6. Wow that was terribly tragic and sad.Nice write Schrei! :)

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  7. @☆Ths[Schrei]☆ :protected cries.? hmm..what do you mean by that..?*scratches my head*

    but anyway..keiichi is a good old friend of mine he's not the one with a bad attitude..my old father was not him..the name of my father (the bad one) is shadow now he's name is crow..but i am no longer visiting the site..maybe just a lil bit..but not so active so let's just put it aside..:3
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  8. Btw..i have edited my post..and now im encouraging you to join a lil contest of mine..just a bit of a guessing game with a valentine award as prize~! :P check it out^_^

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  9. @Tim: mm!^_^ sure!^_^ Will do!^_^
    @Sammy: hehe!^_^ Thanks :) I always try to have what you told me when i wrote a 55-fiction--have a shocking end! :) So thanks to you too!^_^
    @Tripat: Thank you!^_^

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  10. @Ayu: Well I mean that, even though she's in her protective sanctuary she's crying. like she's still sad in a barrier.
    Oh I c not keichii, so it was crow! Well I did have a pretty good talk with him, see this:
    http://animesfreakz.ning.com/profiles/comment/thread?screenName=1m32j67ohcpqn

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  11. hmm..about your guess..? maybe abit detailed and i am searching also for the poem's lesson/msg..:P

    about crow..i cant see your talks with him since its in comment thread..all i can see is my old comments to him..>_

    anyway..he's a sweet talker..you better stay away from that flirt unless you wanna suffer what me, mom lian and sasunaru experienced..he's a player i tell you..
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  12. @Ayu: Lol! You too searching! :D
    oh! that sad then! X(
    well anyway i haven't talked
    to him like for.. a month or so! :D cuz am always online in AO only.. not AF.. :D and i'll take care about falling into his trap! :) promise! :)

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  13. hmm..that's good..other new members of yukomori family reported to me that crow are talking to them in the private chat..poor girls..i also warned them but i needn't told mom Lian..maybe she already knows about it..>_< anyway..i was quite intrigue with AO..can you send me the link to that site..? i might join as well..:P

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  14. (P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

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  15. @Ayu:oh! real sad those girls! :'(
    well you should join AO! :) It's very nice and wayyy better than AF! ;)
    it's:
    http://anime-omnibus.ning.com
    join, and im 'niwa anarane amane' there! :)

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  16. ihhhh, the pic is so scary!! I love the last sentence it's really good. ^^

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  17. @DD-Chan: haha! :D I wanted that to happen!^_^ :) And am happy u liked the last line.. i liked that too!^_^

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